The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram

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how

sugar

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is made from

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cane.

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, there are seven stages, beginning with the growing of

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canes from

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1 and

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ending in

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7 with the drying and cooling of same.

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, from the first

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,

sugar

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cane is planted and is allowed to mature between 12-18 months.

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,

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2 it is harvested either manually or by using a tractor.

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, it goes through a

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of being crushed in a machine for the extraction of its juice which is

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poured into

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filter where the juice goes through a purification

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. In

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5, we have the evaporator

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where the juice is

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heated to become a syrup.

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, the syrup goes through the centrifuge

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where

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crystals are separated from syrup.

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, in the

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and the

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stage

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, the

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faces a drying and cooling

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where the

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is

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dried and cool and is ready for use or packing.