In
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lastCorrect word choice
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yearsCorrect quantifier usage
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, many
people
leavedCorrect your spelling
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their rural
townFix the agreement mistake
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and moved to cities.
This
phenomenon identified in many countries around the world. From my point of view,
this
phenomenon
representChange the verb form
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a positive development for some reasons.
ForChange preposition
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the beginning,
people
who move to the
city
need to search an accommodation and a job.
This
is an opportunity
toChange preposition
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many other
people
to have
financialAdd an article
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source.
Such
,
people
build different
for these persons.
Then
, the rent of these apartments is a financial secour for
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budgetAdd an article
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ofChange preposition
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daily life.
Secondly
, some
people
leave their rural
town
for openingChange preposition
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their personal
affairFix the agreement mistake
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or company. Indeed, to realise
this
goal, these
people
need workers. As
resultCorrect article usage
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, many
jobChange to a plural noun
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will be offered to others.
This
result
helpChange the verb form
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to develop
higherCorrect article usage
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economic level in the
city
.
Such
, the manager of many commercial and industrial companies has
a Correct article usage
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rural
people
move to the
city
and open their personal
companyFix the agreement mistake
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.
Moreover
, these
people
needsChange the verb form
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leisure activities and spend
muchCorrect quantifier usage
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money
forChange preposition
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these activities.
Consequently
, it is an opportunity for the government to develop local tourism activity and to participate
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the growth of the
economicReplace the word
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in the country.
However
, the rural
place
is the most
place
visited by foreigners. Indeed, many natural
places
and monuments are located in rural
placeFix the agreement mistake
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.
Then
, to increase the
percentReplace the word
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of visitors to these
places
, the government need workers who know
thesesCorrect your spelling
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places
better. These workers are the local
people
in
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rural
placeFix the agreement mistake
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.
SuchCorrect quantifier usage
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, many
people
in
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rural
townFix the agreement mistake
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work as
guideFix the agreement mistake
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for
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foreigners. Others open restaurants and hotels. As
resultCorrect article usage
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, the government has only one solution to develop and maintain a high level of daily life in rural
placeFix the agreement mistake
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.
In sum, it is important recently in many countries to not make any difference between life in
city
or rural
places
. In fact, it is essential to make rural
people
stay in their
town
and participate
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the development and the growth of
thesesCorrect your spelling
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places
.