The diagram shows the process of making wool.

The diagram shows the process of making wool.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the process of making wool.
The provided flow chart illustrates the various steps in
woolen
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goods production.
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, the entire process
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into 3 stages and
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consisted of 10 steps. The first stage covers from rearing to the drying session, Meanwhile, the second one covers from spinning to storing. The
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stage is manufacturing various goods. Rearing that the initial field that sheep get enough
wool
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for shearing. When sheep are sheared and their cut
wool
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is passed on the next procedure
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that is
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cleaning and purifying the fleece is put in the drying session. Raw material hangs during the process. After that,
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is spun by machine to produce fine
wool
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or yarns. At
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spinning phase, the
yarn
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can be recycled,
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the
wool
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undergoes
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processing stages, starting from the
wool
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tufts and ending in
yarn
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balls
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. In the final stage, the tufts of
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are stored on shelves before converting them into
balls
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of
yarn
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.
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, the
balls
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of
yarn
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are ready to sell in the market for knitting purposes or some woollen goods are made from the
balls
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of
yarn
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, which are widely used in the manufacture of various products including jackets and carpets

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wool, yarn, balls with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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