Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

Since some people argue that

animals

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should be kept in

captivity

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as zoos to protect both

animals

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and humans from any dangers, others think that it is generally incorrect to keep

animals

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in

captivity

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essay, I will explore the pros and cons of keeping creatures in prison and try to draw some conclusions.

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, I will start by looking at the advantages of how it is beneficial for humans and

animals

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to keep creatures restrained. One of the major plus points is that in

captivity

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the amount of

the

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apply

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protection of the endangered species from

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extinction is

icreased

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increased

. To explain, the government put laws and roles for those species to protect them

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as from overgrazing

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serve the health meals, safety and other medical facilities they needed.

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,

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the consumption of plastic waste and

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it

in

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into

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the sea, many

fishs

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fishes

fish

and other

animals

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lost

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their life since they

are

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apply

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eat the plastics.

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the government now put a rule on the use of plastic yet still if they were preserved earlier they can protect more species.

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, putting the

animals

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in small places might result in worse sometimes. Since

animals

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need large spaces to roam and hunt.

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, the small area makes them feel alone, and moody which indirectly affects their health and mental conditions.

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it may affect the food chain as well.

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, grass produces its own feed from sunlight and

rabbit

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rabbits

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eats

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grass,

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, Human beings are the

predator

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of all producers and consumers.

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, by observing both positive and negative aspects of keeping

animals

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in

captivity

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. Despite sometimes

they feel

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alone and separated from their family, we can not ignore the fact

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preservation will keep them safe and give them medical facilities. The government can

arranged

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inside the

zoos

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zoo's

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large areas to take over the problem.