The graph below shows the population of foxes on four different Californian islands between 1994 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of foxes on four different Californian islands between 1994 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
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graph illustrates the
population
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of
foxes
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on four different Californian Islands, including San Miguel,
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Cruz,
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Rosa, and
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Catalina
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from 1994 to 2014. The San Miguel
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had the least number of
foxes
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for the specified time period. Starting with almost 400
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in 1994
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the figure decreased until it reached the lowest point in 2000 to 2002 with a
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of
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under 15
heads
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. After 2002, its
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rose to around 400 families and has remained stable since 2010. The
Santa
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Cruz
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and the
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Catalina
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boundary have a similar starting point, which is around 1333
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or more.
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, both populations decreased and reached their lowest point in the year 2000 with only around 15
heads
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. The
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Catalina
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population
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began to grow again in 2002, earlier than the
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Cruz’s.
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both lines eventually surged to a higher figure, around 1666
heads
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in 2014. The difference between them is the pace of growth. The
Santa
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Catalina
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grows earlier but slower, showing some plateau. The data in
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Cruz grew rapidly, only showing a bit of a flattened
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from 2010 to 2012. The
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line
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is the purple circle
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which is the
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Rosa
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. It started with the highest number of
population
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, reaching almost 1780
heads
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then
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started to drop rapidly and had the lowest number of all lines in the year 2000. It eventually grew at a relatively slow pace and had the second least
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in 2014. In conclusion, all of the lines show the
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of
foxes
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decreasing especially in the year 2000,
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it grew at different paces with different final numbers of
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in 2014.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, population, foxes, santa, catalina, heads with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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