The graph below shows the population of foxes on four different Californian islands between 1994 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph illustrates the

population

of

foxes

on

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four different areas namely San Miguel, Santa Cruz, Santa Rosa and Santa Catalina between 1994 and 2014. There was a significant decline in the year 1994 to 2000

on

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in

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all four

islands

. These island’s

foxes

population

hit the lowest point in 2000 with all

islands

having less than 100

foxes

.

This

number already makes the species endangered and could lead to

extinction

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the extinction

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of

foxes

on the island.

On the other hand

, these

foxes

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fox's

foxes'

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population

increase

sharply in the

year

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years

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2002-2010. Most of the

islands

increase

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increased

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gradually in 2010-2014 with San Miguel

remained

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constant. Most of the

population

peaks in the year of 2014. Based on the graph it looks like these

foxes

will

increase

even more in the future. In conclusion, the

foxes

on four different Californian

islands

almost undergo an extinction on the island.

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, a dramatic

increase

happened and most of the island

has

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had

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more

foxes

in

the

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2014.