The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the

total world population in 4 countries in 1950

and 2003, and projections for 2050.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph provides information about the proportion of individuals residing in 4 countries,namely India,
China
,the USA, and Japan, during the years 1950,2003, and the forecast for 2050.
Overall
, one noticeable feature is that
China
represented the largest population in the world over decades
while
the forecasting figure for the next few decades will significantly decrease
due to
the new lifestyle of new generations
as well as
being smaller size of households. The total of Indian people comprised around one-seventh population of the total.
Additionally
, the figures for the USA and Japan revealed just small numbers compared to India and
China
.
According to
the data,the residents residing in India modestly grew over the years and
also
were projected to be higher populations in 2050,accounting for one-fifth of the total. The data
also
shows a similar forecast
in
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Japan's citizens ,decreasing from 3% to 1% by 2050.
Conversely
,the forecast of
China
's number will decline by 5%, from 20% in 2003 to 15% in 2050. For the USA people, the total population dropped by approximately 3% over almost 50 years;
nevertheless
, it was projected that the number's remain unchanged in the future.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words china with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • countries
  • 1950
  • 2003
  • projections
  • 2050
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
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