The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates the data of
the manufacturing level of Change preposition
on
diffrent
natural sources in the United Kingdom from 1981 to 2000 by Correct your spelling
different
energy
unit.
Overall
, we can see that the
petroleum had the highest production level, followed by Correct article usage
apply
the
natural gas and coal approximately Correct article usage
apply
same
Correct article usage
the same
number of
total production.
Correct quantifier usage
apply
According to
what is shown, the
petroleum Correct article usage
apply
had
started from nearly 90 million tons, Unnecessary verb
apply
then
, it reached it
peak between 1984 and 1987 Change the pronoun
its
by
nearly 140 million tons of oil.
Change preposition
with
While
,
natural gas was stable until nearly 1991, Remove the comma
apply
then
it showed a smooth growing
. Replace the word
growth
Moreover
, the
coal was Correct article usage
apply
stabel
, Correct your spelling
stable
then
it showed a sharp decrease and reached it
bottom with around 40 Change the pronoun
its
energy
unit
, from 1986 it showed a steady decline to Fix the agreement mistake
units
approximatly
35 Correct your spelling
approximately
energy
unit
.
Fix the agreement mistake
units
To sum up
, we could say that the great britain
depends highly on petroleum as a leading root of Change the capitalization
Britain
energy
, in addition
of
coal and natural gas.Change preposition
to
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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