The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates the data
of
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the manufacturing level of
diffrent
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different
natural sources in the United Kingdom from 1981 to 2000 by
energy
unit.
Overall
, we can see that
the
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petroleum had the highest production level, followed by
the
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natural gas and coal approximately
same
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number of
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total production.
According to
what is shown,
the
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petroleum
had
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started from nearly 90 million tons,
then
, it reached
it
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peak between 1984 and 1987
by
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nearly 140 million tons of oil.
While
,
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natural gas was stable until nearly 1991,
then
it showed a smooth
growing
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.
Moreover
,
the
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coal was
stabel
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stable
,
then
it showed a sharp decrease and reached
it
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bottom with around 40
energy
unit
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units
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, from 1986 it showed a steady decline to
approximatly
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approximately
35
energy
unit
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units
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.
To sum up
, we could say that the great
britain
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depends highly on petroleum as a leading root of
energy
,
in addition
of
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coal and natural gas.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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