The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked about the range of books and non-printed materials in their school library. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of undergraduate or postgraduate students
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who
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documents in their library were good or not.
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Overall
, the proportion of positive responses from undergraduate students for their non-print materials ranked the highest, while
the figure for higher studies alumni rating bad for their non-print materials took the lowest position.
A more detailed look at the charts clearly shows that the number
of postgraduate pupils giving positive responses for documents accounted for approximately 20%. In addition
, the number
of undergraduate students who voted for non-printed books was the highest while
that
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the
number
of written books took the second position. The former was 37% and the latter was 68%. Moreover
, the proportion of both undergraduate and higher studies pupils felt
satisfied about their materials in paper or advanced technology accounted for 20% to 30%.
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who felt
Furthermore
, 20% of alumni have not finished their studies at university rating negative for both types of documents, while
the rate of postgraduate
feeling that they can not learn anything from books in the library was 30% higher. Fix the agreement mistake
postgraduates
Additionally
, that
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the
number
of files in advanced technology was 62%.Submitted by midden-02.tore on
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