University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, numerous households suffer from a huge tuition fee given by the

university

. Many people think that the

university

doesn'

t

provide sufficient services to satisfy their

students

since it doesn'

t

reinvest into itself to improve facilities

such

as a

sport

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centre and dining hall.

Although

I argue that the

university

needs to provide superior services,

but

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I don'

t

think the

university

should be free to

whole

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society.

To begin

, the quality of education could

be deteriorated

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deteriorate

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as professors may get lower wages than

previous

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years if the

university

don'

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t

earn external income.

For

this

reason, they may be less motivated to teach

students

to be better plus decreased demand

of

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becoming teachers.

Therefore

, the importance of

the

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education would be less significant

in

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the perspective of

students

and their parents, so they may start to find the workplace rather than being educated by professionals.

In addition

, the

university

may not sustain

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in

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a long period since there is less inflow of income excluding grants provided by the government.

At the first stage

, the

university

will sack workers out of

univeristy

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university

due to

a high cost, leading to increased inefficiency of the system.

This

would not benefit everyone even though it's free as

students

may

require

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to start the same year again. In conclusion,

low income

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group

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would be benefited

initially

if the

university

provide

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a

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free education for everyone,

however

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it would backfire as a big junk by an increase in unemployment and a decrease in the price level in the economy.