Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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introduction conclusion present
Ensure that your introduction presents both views clearly and concisely without repetition. Also, be clear on your stance right from the beginning.
logical structure
Provide smoother transitions between points and within paragraphs to enhance the overall flow of the essay.
relevant specific examples
Offer more specific and detailed examples to support the main points. This will demonstrate a stronger understanding and engagement with the topic.
clear comprehensive ideas
Expand on each idea more comprehensively, giving reasons and explanations for your opinions and observations.
complete response
Address both views equally with balanced arguments. This will ensure a fuller response to the task prompt.
clear comprehensive ideas
The essay shows a clear engagement with the topic and offers a position on the issue.
logical structure
There is a logical flow to the argument, and main points are generally supported, indicating a reasonable level of organization.
introduction conclusion present
The conclusion attempts to synthesize the views discussed, indicating an awareness of essay structure.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.