The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures in
this
diagram illustrate the phases of recycling
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, the process of recycling
plastic
bottles
is a man-made, cyclical process. It involves 9 stages which begin
from
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throwing
plastic
bottles
in the trash and end with the production of new materials. First of all, after
plastic
bottles
are discarded in the trash, they are transported with other items by the garbage truck to the recycling centre.
Then
, they are sorted
in
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two groups to separate
plastic
materials from other items.
Subsequently
, they are compressed into blocks before being crushed into small pieces and washed. Following that, these small pieces are placed into a big machine which
produce
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them as small
plastic
pellets.
Then
, these
plastic
pellets are heated to form raw materials which are used to produce variable and new products that can be used again. After these new products are
being
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discarded, the process can begin again.
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