You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: explain which course you are interested in say what you know about the university explain why you should receive the scholarship
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to get a scholarship.
Since I was a child I started to interest in English and Math. And underlying reason why I started to
interested
in those Add a missing verb
be interested
subjects
is because of my father and brother. When I was a child they pushed me to learn these subjects
, especially my brother. He taught me the basic things about those subjects
. Now he settled in the capital of our country but when he comes to our district he continues to teach me whatever things he knows about these subjects
. Also
, he helps me boost my knowledge to some level. Hence
why I wanna get math and English courses.
I found pieces of information about the university
when I was studying at
fifth grade and since Change preposition
in
then
I have been started
Verb problem
apply
interest
and learning about the Wrong verb form
interested
university
from the pieces of information on social media. As well as
the name of the university
widely prevalent around the world. And I can reveal some pieces of informations
about the Change the wording
information
pieces of information
university
that I know. For instance
: the teaching methods
of the university
is
really famous. Because these Correct subject-verb agreement
are
methods
are not the same as the methods
of other universities as well and these methods
are far more useful and effectual rather
than others. The second reason- the Correct word choice
effective
university
is well- known
for the quality of its teachers. I read the information that all teachers in the Correct your spelling
well-known
university
are professors or had
a high degree Wrong verb form
have
for
their Change preposition
in
subjects
. And they have achieved numerous accomplishments, both personally and through the students
I need a scholarship for studying
Change preposition
to study
in
Change preposition
apply
an
abroad and the scholarship is a really significant feature sake of studying there. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
after graduation from the Add a comma
Furthermore,
university
I wanna come back here and distribute apply knowledge whereby I received from there.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Umida AbdumajitovaAdd a comma
university,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph discusses a single main idea to improve coherence. This will make your letter easier to follow.
coherence cohesion
Enhance your logical structure by organizing the letter into clear sections: introduction, body paragraphs (one for each main point), and a conclusion.
task achievement
Provide more specific details about the course you are interested in and how it aligns with your career goals. This will strengthen your task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Your letter includes a clear greeting and closing, which are important components of a formal letter.
task achievement
The overall tone of your letter is polite and appropriate for a scholarship inquiry.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.