You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: explain which course you are interested in say what you know about the university explain why you should receive the scholarship

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to get a scholarship. Since I was a child I started to interest in English and Math. And underlying reason why I started to

interested

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in those

subjects

is because of my father and brother. When I was a child they pushed me to learn these

subjects

, especially my brother. He taught me the basic things about those

subjects

. Now he settled in the capital of our country but when he comes to our district he continues to teach me whatever things he knows about these

subjects

.

Also

, he helps me boost my knowledge to some level.

Hence

why I wanna get math and English courses. I found pieces of information about the

university

when I was studying

at

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fifth grade and since

then

I have been

started

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interest

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and learning about the

university

from the pieces of information on social media.

As well as

the name of the

university

widely prevalent around the world. And I can reveal some pieces of

informations

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information

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about the

university

that I know.

For instance

: the teaching

methods

of the

university

is

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really famous. Because these

methods

are not the same as the

methods

of other universities as well and these

methods

are far more useful and

effectual rather

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than others. The second reason- the

university

is

well- known

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for the quality of its teachers. I read the information that all teachers in the

university

are professors or

had

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a high degree

for

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in

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their

subjects

. And they have achieved numerous accomplishments, both personally and through the students I need a scholarship

for studying

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to study

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in

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apply

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an

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apply

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abroad and the scholarship is a really significant feature sake of studying there.

Furthermore

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after graduation from the

university

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university,

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I wanna come back here and distribute apply knowledge whereby I received from there. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Umida Abdumajitova