Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend reducing this problem ?
People are destroying the earth unintentionally by throwing all
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
plastic
and this
essay will examine different measures that can be implemented to mitigate this
issue.
To begin
with
applying lack of Add a comma
with,
alternative
for Fix the agreement mistake
alternatives
plastic
is the most convenience
concern. Nowadays people are consuming bunches of Replace the word
convenient
plastic
goods, for different usage
. But Replace the word
uses
unfortunately
there are no substitutes for them. Add a comma
unfortunately,
for example
on newspaper published news that 39%of the production of European factories was made of plastic
therefore
environment not only should consider a heavy tax for the import of plastic
,but also
strict regulation for plastic
regulation.on the other hand
,the government should invest to
changing the consumer culture of people Change preposition
in
Beside
enhancing support for garbage collection Correct your spelling
Besides
campaign
is another matter which can not be disregarded as well. Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
For
example
the Add a comma
example,
researcher
are indicating that these campaigns help a lot to remove poison of Fix the agreement mistake
researchers
plastic
derivatives and they help to protect the
nature Correct article usage
apply
thus
change
the conditions towards a Wrong verb form
changing
heathier
life.
Correct your spelling
healthier
To conclude
I realize the
environmentalists are Correct your spelling
that
being changed
the condition of nature for the better. Wrong verb form
changing
Thus
I assume that every public is improving their way of recycling.Submitted by aksoysana on
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task achievement
Your essay addresses the question asked and suggests solutions to the problem mentioned, which is good. However, make sure to fully elaborate on each point made to provide a clearer, more comprehensive response. Including specific examples and data would greatly improve your argument.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a focused topic sentence and that ideas flow logically from one to the next. Avoid combining multiple ideas into a single paragraph without clear distinction.
overall
Proofread your work to correct grammatical errors and improve sentence structure. Additionally, avoid base-level vocabulary where possible; utilize a wider range of vocabulary and sentence structures to demonstrate your language proficiency.
task achievement
Your essay effectively identifies specific measures that can be taken to reduce plastic waste, showing an understanding of the topic.
coherence cohesion
Both an introduction and a conclusion are present, guiding the reader through your points effectively.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion