Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, numerous

airlines

have been a huge problem by creating more noise,

pollution

and airport construction. Many people think that

benefits

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the benefits

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of low-cost passenger flights

outweight

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outweigh

outweighed

drawbacks

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the drawbacks

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, but I strongly argue that the legal authority should impose a

tax

on the airline.

To begin

, an

increase

in air

traffics

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traffic increases

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increase

the

emmision

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emission

of

the

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apply

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carbon dioxide, leading to raised

the

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apply

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global temperature. Taxing the airline which

retians

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retains

many

airlines

can prevent it from constructing new ones.

For example

, the government could set

the

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a

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tax

of 20% on profits made from new

airlines

.

This

leads to

discouraged

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discourage

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building new planes, but

increase

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increases

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the price of tickets.

Consequently

, the amount of

pollution

will

be plummeted

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plummet

have plummeted

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significantly, so there will be less burden on society.

Furthermore

, increased

airlines

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airline

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yields to building more airports

due to

less space in

remained

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remaining

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airports.

Hence

,

deforestration

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deforestation

may take place to give up the area for

new

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a new

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airport, leading to harm the nature.

However

, the

tax

charged on

airlines

incentivises them to construct planes with higher efficiency, so the amount of

pollution

will

be deteriorated

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deteriorate

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.

In contrast

, a large number of households

get

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apply

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benefited

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benefit

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from

a

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the

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low price of the airline

due to

less

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lower

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expenses during

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the holiday

a holiday

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holiday

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holidays

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, but they are not aware that there could be an

increase

in the income

tax

to reduce the level of

pollution

planned by the government. In conclusion, the

tax

charged on

airlines

will show the intention of protecting the environment.

In

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Overall

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overall

, the

tax

is the major method to improve the environmental condition

for

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of

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society.