The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Uk, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Uk, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The given line graph depicts the average carbon dioxide 
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per
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in four European countries—United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal—over a 40-year period from 1967 to 2007. In summary, the UK and Italy experienced fluctuations in CO2
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,
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Sweden and Portugal maintained more stable levels. The
overall
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trend suggests that efforts to reduce
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varied across these European nations during the specified period. In 1967, the UK’s CO2
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stood at approximately 9 metric
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per
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.Over the next two decades,
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gradually declined, reaching around 7 metric
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by 1987.
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, from 1987 to 2007, there was a noticeable upward trend, with
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surpassing 9 metric
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again.Sweden consistently maintained lower
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than the UK throughout the entire period.Starting at approximately 6 metric
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in 1967, Sweden’s
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remained relatively stable. By 2007,
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had only marginally increased, reaching around 7 metric
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. Italy’s
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mirrored the UK’s pattern
initially
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, declining from about 6 metric
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in 1967 to 5 metric
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by 1987.
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, unlike the UK, Italy’s
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continued to decrease steadily.By 2007, Italy had the lowest
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among the four countries, hovering around 4 metric
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per
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.Portugal’s
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were consistently the lowest, starting at approximately 2 metric
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in 1967.Over the years,
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remained relatively stable, with minor fluctuations.By 2007, Portugal’s
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were still below 3 metric
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per
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