The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Uk, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the Uk, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The given line graph depicts the average carbon dioxide 
emissions
per
person
in four European countries—United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal—over a 40-year period from 1967 to 2007. In summary, the UK and Italy experienced fluctuations in CO2
emissions
,
while
Sweden and Portugal maintained more stable levels. The
overall
trend suggests that efforts to reduce
emissions
varied across these European nations during the specified period. In 1967, the UK’s CO2
emissions
stood at approximately 9 metric
tonnes
per
person
.Over the next two decades,
emissions
gradually declined, reaching around 7 metric
tonnes
by 1987.
However
, from 1987 to 2007, there was a noticeable upward trend, with
emissions
surpassing 9 metric
tonnes
again.Sweden consistently maintained lower
emissions
than the UK throughout the entire period.Starting at approximately 6 metric
tonnes
in 1967, Sweden’s
emissions
remained relatively stable. By 2007,
emissions
had only marginally increased, reaching around 7 metric
tonnes
per
person
. Italy’s
emissions
mirrored the UK’s pattern
initially
, declining from about 6 metric
tonnes
in 1967 to 5 metric
tonnes
by 1987.
However
, unlike the UK, Italy’s
emissions
continued to decrease steadily.By 2007, Italy had the lowest
emissions
among the four countries, hovering around 4 metric
tonnes
per
person
.Portugal’s
emissions
were consistently the lowest, starting at approximately 2 metric
tonnes
in 1967.Over the years,
emissions
remained relatively stable, with minor fluctuations.By 2007, Portugal’s
emissions
were still below 3 metric
tonnes
per
person
.
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