Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce this pressure?

In the present day, many aspects

such

as academic, social, and commercial are constraining young

generations

. Those three aspects are related to the

children

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daily life,

for example

, school, friends, and kids’

entertainments

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.

This

essay will discuss the possible cause of these demands and what actions should be taken to reduce

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. Modernization is the root cause of the increasing oppression

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adolescents. As the world is developing in a fast pace period, people

accordingly

demand to the young generation to catch up to it.

Furthermore

, the easiness of transferring and getting information would put a lot more provocation to the

adult

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adults

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that think

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children these days have a trouble-free life getting all they need.

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, toddlers can simply learn the majority of subjects they want from YouTube,

this

kind of learning method could not

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done a decade ago. As

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result, the tension

due to

the false perceptions, simultaneously,

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the young

generations

have to excel academically and socially to envision their bright future. Sadly,

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modernization is not only about a trouble-free life for adolescents but

also

about increasing the amount of competitiveness between them both in academic and

social

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socially

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. It is not exaggerating to say that young students

forced

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to become number one in every chance, especially in Asia.

Therefore

, the role of families

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vital to tackle

this

problem.

Firstly

, parents have to understand their youngsters’

gift

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and

personality

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personalities

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, they could offer them to do

vast

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variety of activities to know what the child might enjoy.

Secondly

, give their youngsters all the

supports

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,

for example

, hiring a private tutor to enhance their interest.

Lastly

, actively encourage them to do better than before not to do better than others,

thus

the young

generations

will always reflect on their development and will not seek other validations for what they have achieved. In conclusion, the tight pressures on young

generations

that have risen these past few years are undeniably the result of modernization’s perceptions. To reduce those enforcements, the families should work together to understand their offspring, give them support on what they enjoy, and guide them to always focus on their self-development.