The pie chart shows the percentage of carbon dioxide (CO2) emitted by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while the bar graph shows the top 6 emitters per capita in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram above illustrates the percentage of dioxide (CO2) by the 6 higher polluters in 2015.
In 2015,China
were
the biggest polluter by just over 20 per Change the verb form
was
cent
, the United States placed second place by 15 per cent
, and both India and Russia were around 6 per cent
.
However
, other countries like Japan,Germany ,South Korea and Saudi Arabia have around 2 per cent
, while
the rest of the world is a little above 20 per cent
.
Overall
,both China and the United States are the biggest two polluters with a significant percentage .Submitted by khalidashgar23 on
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