The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram, which depicts great detail, illustrates the composition of solar panels and the usage of them.
Overall
, it can be observed that the solar panel can be utilised to heat up Linking Words
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Use synonyms
water
and Use synonyms
air
by their respective processes.
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To begin
with, a solar panel consists of two main components, which are a box, approximately square shape, and a transparent top to seal the opened structure. It has an inlet and outlet on the sides of the box to assist any process occurring in it. The possible function of solar panels is to increase the temperatures of Linking Words
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Both
undergo a homogeneous process, but the only stark difference is that Use synonyms
water
requires a Use synonyms
water
pipe to facilitate the procedure.
Turning to the process, it needs energy from the sun in order to catalyse the heating up, with the aid of the transparent top to prevent excessive rays. The first step involves the flow of cool Use synonyms
air
or Use synonyms
water
into the box through the inlet attached. Use synonyms
Air
molecules will just circulate through the empty space, meanwhile, Use synonyms
water
will be directed by the pipe Use synonyms
while
they experience temperature escalation. Linking Words
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warmed elements will stream out from the outlet and Use synonyms
this
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