The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for

different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph below shows the number of
people
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participating in varying activities at a social centre located in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2020.
Overall
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, with the exception of Amateur dramatics, every category has experienced an increase in participants, with the Film club having the highest amount of followers and Table tennis coming up second.
To begin
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with, the Film Club started in 2000 with over 60
people
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and stayed stable in the 20 years that followed, with a slightly higher record in 2020. Martial arts
also
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remained more or less the same, with approximately 37 members before and just below 40 afterwards. The table tennis group started with only 16 participants, but
then
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quickly surged in popularity, especially for the 2010 to 2020 period, clocking in at almost 65
people
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.
In contrast
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, the Amateur Dramatics Club lost as many as 25 members since its starting point, with only 6 followers in 2020.
Lastly
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, the musical performances were created in 2005, and rapidly picked up
people
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, landing third place on the chart with almost 20 of them after 15 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rates
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable numbers
  • fluctuations
  • overall participation
  • comparison
  • activities
  • social centre
  • Melbourne
  • participants
  • highlight
  • report
  • graph illustrates/demonstrates
  • 20-year period
  • key features
  • main features
  • statistical data
  • variations
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