Nowadays scientists and tourists are allowed to travel to remote natural environments. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In

this

fast growing

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era

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travel has become an easy option. Scientists and

tourists

are travelling to remote and

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locations.

This

presents both opportunities

as well as

challenges.

While

there are notable benefits of travel,

such

as scientific discoveries and economic growth, there are

also

significant drawbacks, including environmental degradation and disruption of

local

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ecosystem.

This

essay will explore both sides to determine if advantages outweigh the the disadvantages. One of the major benefits of scientists travelling to

such

natural environments is the opportunity for groundbreaking discoveries. Travelling to

such

places

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them understand the ecosystem and habitat of the rare species living in that ecosystem.

Additionally

being in

such

places

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them understand the climatic situation which is

otherwise

inaccessible.

For instance

, the research conducted in

Arctic

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and Antarctic regions has provided crucial insights into climate change and its impact on global weather

pattern

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.

Such

discoveries and revelations

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in protecting

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vulnerable species and habitats. Tourism, when managed responsibly can help in boosting the economy of remote

places

. It can help in providing financial support to local communities by creating various job opportunities.

For instance

, in Masai Mara eco-tourism has boosted the economy significantly by attracting

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international visitors. The profits from tourism

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been reinvested in advancements of local communities.

Moreover

, providing opportunities

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people to enjoy and appreciate

such

natural beauty on earth is

once-in-a-lifetime

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experience in every person's life. As every coin has two sides, the disadvantages of

this

travel cannot be ignored. The influx of

tourist

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can lead

of

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environmental degradation, including pollution and habitat destruction.

Furthermore

, the presence of

tourists

also

disturbs the wildlife.

Moreover

, the fact that

such

remote locations might have harsh

climate

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and natural

phenomenon

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such

as

avalanche

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or snow storms, the visitors jeopardise their lives by travelling to these

places

. In conclusion, there are substantial benefits of scientists and

tourists

travelling to

such

remote

places

,

such

as advancing scientific knowledge and boosting

economy

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,

however

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these should be carefully weighed against the potential harms. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and having regulations and directing

tourists

can help mitigate the inherent dangers that might happen.