The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The presented line graph illustrates data about the number of
students
in Iran
, Greece
and Turkey
who entered Sheffield University over the period of the years 2005 and 2009.
Overall
, it is clear that
the proportion of Iranian and Turkish students
was much higher in comparison with Greece
. Iran
had the fastest growth, meanwhile, Greece
experienced a decline over the period shown.
In agreement with the line graph, in 2005 the biggest amount of graduates was
in Change the verb form
were
Greece
about 180 of them, while
in Turkey
and Iran
the figures for Add a comma
Iran,
students
was
smaller 20 and 40 respectively. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Furthermore
, in 2007 the count of students
in Iran
and Greece
was almost the same 70. However
, in Turkey
the count was about 90.
Add a comma
Turkey,
Moreover
, in 2009 the biggest count of students
was in Iran
about 160, and then
was Turkey
nearly 120. Nevertheless
, in Greece
was
the smallest number almost 40.Correct pronoun usage
there was
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, iran, greece, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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