The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
The bar chart illustrates the
hours
of a teenager's weekly spending on certain activities.
Overall
, teenagers spend the most of their time
watching television. In addition
, bowling is the least-done activity among teens. The time
spent watching DVDs and bowling flactuated
for 5 years. The highest number watching DVDs reached was more than 15 Correct your spelling
fluctuated
hours
, and the lowest was 10 hours
in a total of 7 days.
According to
the bar chart, time
spent watching television reached more than 35 hours
in 2006 and 2007. Besides
that, there is not a single year that bowling past more than 5 hours
per week. Moreover
, the only time
that going to pubs/discos activity time
went below 10 hours
in a week was in 2002.
Furthermore
, both doing homework and doing sports felt the same. Unlike doing homework and doing sports, shopping rose straight until 2006, in 2006 and 2007, shopping stayed the same at 15 hours
a week.Submitted by enver07600 on
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