The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar graph gives information about the distribution of International pupils from five different
countries
across three universities namely Smithtown
University
,
University
of Riverview and Earlwood
University
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that International student enrollment in five
countries
was dominated by the
University
of Riverview,
whereas
the other universities were the least popular. Observing the chart in more detail, the
University
of Riverview became the most enrolled International student in over five
countries
with around 1000 to 7500 students. Interestingly, Indian students were the largest participants at around 7500. Earlwood
University
ended up becoming the second rank of the most enrolled in almost all
countries
except in India where they accounted for the
last
position at 5000. Notably, the figures for Nepal and Indonesia were equal at 4000 and 1000, consecutively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolment trends
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating enrolments
  • international student numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • favored choice
  • global economic conditions
  • admission policies
  • program offerings
  • student satisfaction
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