The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
number
of
adults
(in thousands) joining various major sports in 1997 and 2017. These major sports were
Tennis
, Basketball, Cricket, Golf, Swimming, Football and Rugby.
Overall
,
tennis
had the highest
number
of
adults
participating in both 1997 and 2017
whereas
basketball had the lowest
number
of adult
participants
in 1997 and cricket had the lowest
number
in 2017. In 1997, Basketball had the lowest
number
of
adults
participating in
this
sport with around 9,000
participants
.
Also
, both Golf and Football had the same
number
of
adults
joining each sport with a bit over 30,000
participants
.
Tennis
had the most
participants
with 50,000
adults
joining the studies. By 2017, the majority of the sports have an increment of
participants
.
However
, Cricket
players
had dipped from around 25,000 in 1997, to around 7,000 adult
players
in 2017. The
number
of
adults
who joined Swimming in 1997 and 2017 has remained constant with around 35,000. Football and Rugby
players
have increased in 2017 with around almost 50,000
players
for both games.
Tennis
remained to have the most adult
participants
in 2017 with almost 55,000
players
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, adults, tennis, participants, players with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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  • participation rate
  • increase/decrease in numbers
  • trend
  • decade
  • relatively stable
  • major sports
  • potential reasons
  • contributing factors
  • public interest
  • comparison
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