The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
number
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of
adults
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(in thousands) joining various major sports in 1997 and 2017. These major sports were
Tennis
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, Basketball, Cricket, Golf, Swimming, Football and Rugby.
Overall
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,
tennis
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had the highest
number
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of
adults
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participating in both 1997 and 2017
whereas
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basketball had the lowest
number
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of adult
participants
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in 1997 and cricket had the lowest
number
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in 2017. In 1997, Basketball had the lowest
number
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of
adults
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participating in
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sport with around 9,000
participants
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.
Also
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, both Golf and Football had the same
number
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of
adults
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joining each sport with a bit over 30,000
participants
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.
Tennis
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had the most
participants
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with 50,000
adults
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joining the studies. By 2017, the majority of the sports have an increment of
participants
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.
However
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, Cricket
players
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had dipped from around 25,000 in 1997, to around 7,000 adult
players
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in 2017. The
number
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of
adults
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who joined Swimming in 1997 and 2017 has remained constant with around 35,000. Football and Rugby
players
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have increased in 2017 with around almost 50,000
players
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for both games.
Tennis
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remained to have the most adult
participants
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in 2017 with almost 55,000
players
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, adults, tennis, participants, players with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rate
  • increase/decrease in numbers
  • trend
  • decade
  • relatively stable
  • major sports
  • potential reasons
  • contributing factors
  • public interest
  • comparison
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