Task1: The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Task1: The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line chart illustrates the
consumption
patterns of four different types of
meat
and fish in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, the intake of chicken consistently increased throughout the 25 years, ultimately becoming the most popular
meat
by 1989.
In contrast
, fish remained the least popular choice throughout the
period
, whose
consumption
was around 50
grams
weekly intake per capita over the whole
period
. In 1979, beef was the most consumed
meat
in the country, with an average of 220
grams
per person per week. Meanwhile, every person only bought approximately 145g of chicken per week in the year, which was even lower than lamb. But
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chicken
consumption
overtook that of lamb and beef, becoming the primary
consumption
meat
in 1989, and has stayed the main position in the market, which reached 250g weekly intake per capita in 2004. The usage of beef experienced a surge in the first five years from 1979, reaching a peak of 259
grams
per person per week.
However
, it continuously fell to only 110g over the rest of the
period
.
However
, both lamb and fish
consumption
followed a descending trend over the whole
period
, which fell to 60 and 50
grams
respectively in 2004.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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