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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of the populations categorized by the three age groups in
Yemen
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 and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the proportions of the three categories differ between
Yemen
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 and Italy.
Additionally
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, these figures are expected to change significantly in 2050. Focusing on the 2020 figures,
although
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 people aged 0-14
years
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 consisted
about
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of about
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 half of the total in
Yemen
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, at 50.1%, Italy's figure was below one-third of
Yemen
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's. For 15-59
years
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, the former's number was 46.3% and the latter's was 61.6%.
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, 24.1% of people were over 60
years
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 old.
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,
Yemen
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's population of
this
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 age group was negligible, at 3.6%. Turning to the anticipations, in Italy, over 60
years
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 people will increase considerably to 42.3%,
while
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Yemen
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 will remain small, at 5.7%. The figures of 0-14
years
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 are expected to decrease, by 2.8% in Italy and 23.0% in
Yemen
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, respectively. The Italian population of 15-59
years
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 will see a fall to 46.2%
whereas
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 there will be an increase in
Yemen
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, at 57.3%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age distribution
  • population skewed
  • younger age groups
  • significant proportion
  • older population
  • projected
  • demographics
  • societal and economic challenges
  • youthful population
  • growing workforce
  • economic growth
  • aging population
  • demand for healthcare
  • pension systems
  • invest in education
  • job creation
  • demographic dividend
  • social policies
  • sustainable
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