The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport.
The given graph illustrates the visitors who used 5 different modes of transportation in percentage within a particular nation from 1989 to 2009. Note that each visitor may
used
more than one mode of transportation.
Change the verb form
use
Overall
, air and car travels
Fix the agreement mistake
travel
have
decreased slightly, Correct subject-verb agreement
has
meanwhile
the utilization of Add a comma
meanwhile,
transports
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
such
as rail, coach and ferry increased.Submitted by ieltswritingband99 on
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