The bar chart below shows the number of people who visited different museums in London during different months in 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The provided bar chart enumerates the number of people who visited famous
museums
in London in different months in 2015.
All things considered; it is evident that a vast of visitors
were at the British Museum whereas
the national museum was approximately the same throughout the year.
British museums
occupied the highest figures among all museums
with 700.000 visitors
respectively Compared with the other museums
, especially in August. Controversial with national museums
which had the lowest number of visitors
and roughly under 200.000. history museums
fluctuated whole the year and reached 600.000 in August while
the number of visitors
declined at the beginning of December.
Finally
, it is clear that
the science museums
were over 400.000 by June and then
continued to decrease then
suddenly increased to 500.000 at the end
of September, then
it surged down to the lowest figure of visitors
in December.Submitted by rraghad.b on
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