The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 200

The given line graph illustrates information about the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the four countries. United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal during the 40 years. Starting from 1967 to 2007. From a closer inspection of the

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it is apparent that Portugal and

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Italy's

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figures were meaningfully higher than

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Kingdom and Sweden as those figures

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decreased slightly during the given period. In 1967 the rate of Italy

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4 and

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sector increased slightly from 4 to 6 in 1977, and

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figure grew exponentially and exclusively to 8 until

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2007. Portugal

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main

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change until 1987 and

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rate

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rose

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from 3 to 4,5 in 1997 and

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index continued

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of the period. Turning to the United Kingdom,

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figure decreased slightly from 11 to 8,5 during the given period. Sweden

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peaked at 11 in 1977 and

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sector dipped from 11 to 6,5 during the 10 years as

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dropping continued until 2007.