The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 200

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 200
The given line graph illustrates information about the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the four countries. United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal during the 40 years. Starting from 1967 to 2007. From a closer inspection of the
graph
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graph,
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it is apparent that Portugal and
Italy
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Italy's
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figures were meaningfully higher than
United
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the United
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Kingdom and Sweden as those figures
showed
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decreased slightly during the given period. In 1967 the rate of Italy
showed
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4 and
this
sector increased slightly from 4 to 6 in 1977, and
this
figure grew exponentially and exclusively to 8 until
the
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2007. Portugal
present
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main
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change until 1987 and
this
rate
rised
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rose
raised
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from 3 to 4,5 in 1997 and
this
index continued
at the end
of the period. Turning to the United Kingdom,
this
figure decreased slightly from 11 to 8,5 during the given period. Sweden
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peaked at 11 in 1977 and
this
sector dipped from 11 to 6,5 during the 10 years as
this
dropping continued until 2007.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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