The table given below provides information about the projected costings over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.
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The provided data illustrates the expected cost of three different
projects
, created to develop forestry that is
environment friendly, over the next 5 years. The pie chart shows the possible spendings
during the Fix the agreement mistake
spending
first
year
of the project.
Overall
, in Year
1
the biggest amount of money will be spent on Add a comma
1,
sallaries
. There is a common pattern for years 3 to 5 for all Correct your spelling
salaries
projects
, where the costs remain approximately the same during this
time frame. For West Africa and Central America, Year
1 will be the most expensive.
A decrese
in expenses is visible for both, West Africa and Central America, over the Correct your spelling
decrease
5
Add a hyphen
5-year
year
period with only a slight fluctuation at the end
for the first
mentioned. However
, for the South-east
Asia Correct your spelling
Southeast
project
the costs rise from 30 to 50 million, Add a comma
project,
while
experiencing a slight drop during the second year
. If the expenses for first
two Correct article usage
the first
projects
mentioned would be
combined, they would still remain Wrong verb form
were
cheapewr
than the Correct your spelling
cheaper
South - east
Asia Correct your spelling
Southeast
projects
, which requires
about 190 million in total.
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require
Year
1 seems to be quite expensive for the first
two projects
. Because the salaries take up exactly a
half of the expenses, it leaves the set-up costs at 30% and the training and office expenditures both at only 10%.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words projects, first, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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