The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given bar chart depicts the separation rates of two different countries,
Finland
and Sweden
, for the period of 5 years
, from 2011 to 2015. The highest number of divorces in Sweden
happened in 2012 with almost 50 percent
, whilst Change the spelling
per cent
Finland
's divorce rate has risen significantly in the last
2 years
at
above 40 Change preposition
to
percent
.
In the year 2012, Change the spelling
per cent
Finland
faced rare cases of divorce at above percentage of 30 whilst Sweden
reached its lowest in 2015 only. There is also
a gradual fluctuation in the separation ratio of Sweden
throughout the years
, 2011 to 2015. However
, Finland
's ratio rising slightly from 2012 to 2015.
In conclusion, the divorce ratio remains in the given two countries between 30 percent
to 50 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in all the mentioned Change the spelling
per cent
years
. As compared to Sweden
's separation percentage which remains a little above that
Correct determiner usage
apply
Finland
's from the year 2011 to 2014, fell in 2015 with almost 5 percent
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