The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart displays the amount of
divorce
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rates in Finland and
Sweden
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between 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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,
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divorce
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the divorce
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rate
deceased
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decreased
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slightly in
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sweden
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Sweden
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,
however
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, it increased slightly in
finland
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Finland
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.
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Sweden
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Sweden's
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rates of
divorce
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were higher during nearly all the recorded years. In
Sweden
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,
divorce
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percentages increased slightly from nearly 45% to just below 50%, and
then
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the Swedish rates dropped gradually to just below 40% in 2015, one-tenth lower than the starting ratio. In Finland,
divorce
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proprtions
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proportions
proportion
declined slightly from almost 40% to just over 30% between 2011 and 2012. After that, the
dicorce
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divorce
rate rose gradually from just above 30% in 2012 to roughly 40% in 2015.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words divorce, sweden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • divorce rates
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • notable
  • significant
  • substantial
  • higher
  • lower
  • comparison
  • consistent
  • vary
  • percent
  • overall
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