The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The information regarding the

number

of visitors to Ashdown Museum during and after its refurbishment is depicted

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the given table. The pie chart illustrates the satisfaction of travellers.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that the

number

of dissatisfaction had been decreased year after refurbishment.

However

, the

number

of individuals who didn’t

response

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had levelled off during

the

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period of time. To commence with, It is evident from

data

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that, the first category is dissatisfied. It can be seen that it had declined by 25%. The

another

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part that fell down was very satisfied, the

response

reached

at

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15 which was at 10 before.

Moreover

, the

non

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response

number

didn’t change its movement at all.

Furthermore

,When it comes to satisfied visitors, the

number

had

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inclined

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increased

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from 30 to 40. In the end, the

last

category very satisfied travellers showed

significant

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rise in the

response

which had been changed from 15 to 35.At the same time,

total

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number

of travellers was higher during the year after refurbishment

that

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stands at 92,000.The difference of 18,000 people had been seen in these years.