You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room.Write to the hotel management to complain.
Dear Sir,
My name is Lisha Lokai.
Last
week, I had a conference time with my company, so I stayed at one of your hotel
branches located at
the City Centre, Mississauga, as Change preposition
in
this
location was very near to my conference place. I am writing this
letter with regard to express my dissatisfaction with the hotel
room
which was assigned to me.
The assigned room
was not as shown in the pictures when I booked it online. As per the description, it was a spacious room
,
and had a Queen size bed Remove the comma
apply
along with
a complete sofa set in addition
to one chair and desktop table. But there was no sofa at all, and the room
size was also
too small. Apart from that, the room
was not well lit up. Owing to my conference, I had to do my presentations, but it was so difficult to focus on my work because of the dull room
environment. Additionally
, the air conditioner was also
not functioning properly. There was no option on the remote to set up the auto cut-off option so that I could sleep without any disturbance.
I would advise you not to manipulate the information on your hotel
website, rather than give clear and accurate information so one can choose an appropriate room
accordingly
. Also
, as I was extemely
disappointed with your service, so I'm expecting that you will arrange a refund of at least 50% of my Correct your spelling
extremely
hotel
expenses.
I look forward to hearing from you about when and how much you will return to me.
Yours sincerely,
Alicia Liberty.Submitted by kanwalkaur05 on
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spelling
Make sure to proofread your text to catch any spelling errors, such as 'extemely' which should be 'extremely'.
specific examples
It would be beneficial to provide specific examples of how the issues affected your stay. This could make your complaint stronger and more persuasive.
paragraph structure
Consider breaking down the longer paragraphs into smaller ones to enhance readability. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea. For instance, you could separate the room description issues from the discomforts caused by inadequate lighting and non-functioning air conditioner.
structure
You included a clear introduction and conclusion, making your letter well-rounded.
tone
The tone of your letter is polite yet firm, appropriate for a formal complaint.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite