The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays how the average prices of
three
metals
(copper, nickel
, and zinc) changed in
every month in 2014.
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apply
Overall
, these three
metals
experience
Wrong verb form
experienced
the
Correct article usage
apply
similiar
changes in 2014. And the Correct your spelling
similar
price
of the nickel
experienced the
significant Correct article usage
a
flucturation
during Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
this
period.
In January, the
Correct article usage
apply
nickel
was the largest change
in these three
metals
, at 6% compared with its price
last
month, while
the
copper Correct article usage
apply
at
2% and Add a missing verb
was at
the
zinc at 1% respectively. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the change
on
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in
nickel
's price
drop
rapidly to 1% in March, Wrong verb form
dropped
then
, it remained
Verb problem
maintained
this
change
in April until it declined again, at -3% in June. Before December
, the nickel
price
change
ecperienced
a slight increase but never Correct your spelling
experienced
recoverd
at its previous level, just Correct your spelling
recovered
remained
at 1% in Wrong verb form
remaining
December
.
In contrast
, in January, the change
in price
of copper was lower than Add an article
the price
the
Correct determiner usage
that
nickel
. Change preposition
of nickel
Similiarly
to Correct your spelling
Similar
nickel
, it decreased steadly
until June, and the next month, Correct your spelling
steadily
this
trend changed to be
an increase, at 1%. In Unnecessary verb
apply
December
, this
trend remained its
previous level, at nearly 1.5%.
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at its
However
, although
the
zinc was the smallest Correct article usage
apply
change
in price
in January, it became the highest of these three
metals
in December
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, metals, nickel, price, change, december with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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