The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays how the average prices of
three
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metals
(copper, Use synonyms
nickel
, and zinc) changed Use synonyms
in
every month in 2014.
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apply
Overall
, these Linking Words
three
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metals
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experience
Wrong verb form
experienced
the
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apply
similiar
changes in 2014. And the Correct your spelling
similar
price
of the Use synonyms
nickel
experienced Use synonyms
the
significant Correct article usage
a
flucturation
during Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
this
period.
In January, Linking Words
the
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apply
nickel
was the largest Use synonyms
change
in these Use synonyms
three
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metals
, at 6% compared with its Use synonyms
price
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last
month, Linking Words
while
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the
copper Correct article usage
apply
at
2% and Add a missing verb
was at
the
zinc at 1% respectively. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the Linking Words
change
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on
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in
nickel
's Use synonyms
price
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drop
rapidly to 1% in March, Wrong verb form
dropped
then
, it Linking Words
remained
Verb problem
maintained
this
Linking Words
change
in April until it declined again, at -3% in June. Before Use synonyms
December
, the Use synonyms
nickel
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price
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change
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ecperienced
a slight increase but never Correct your spelling
experienced
recoverd
at its previous level, just Correct your spelling
recovered
remained
at 1% in Wrong verb form
remaining
December
.
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In contrast
, in January, the Linking Words
change
in Use synonyms
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price
of copper was lower than Add an article
the price
the
Correct determiner usage
that
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nickel
. Change preposition
of nickel
Similiarly
to Correct your spelling
Similar
nickel
, it decreased Use synonyms
steadly
until June, and the next month, Correct your spelling
steadily
this
trend changed to Linking Words
be
an increase, at 1%. In Unnecessary verb
apply
December
, Use synonyms
this
trend remained Linking Words
its
previous level, at nearly 1.5%.
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at its
However
, Linking Words
although
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the
zinc was the smallest Correct article usage
apply
change
in Use synonyms
price
in January, it became the highest of these Use synonyms
three
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metals
in Use synonyms
December
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, metals, nickel, price, change, december with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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