The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many
tourists
selected a specific
caribbean
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island
as their destination, whether stayed on
island
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the island
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or on cruise ships, over eight consecutive years from 2010 to 2017. Units are measured in millions.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total number of
tourists
witnessed a considerable upward trend during the period given.
Furthermore
, the
quantity
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number
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of
travelers
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travellers
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who stayed
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stayed
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on sea vessels reversed from being lower than those entering the
island
to becoming higher
at the end
.
Firstly
, the figure for visitors staying on ships started at a quarter of a
million
in the first year,
then
hit half a
million
in 2011 and a quarter of a
million
again in 2012, before facing five consecutive climbs to reach the peak of 2
million
in 2017.
Moreover
, the number of
tourists
landing on
island
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the island
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began the period by registering
three quarters
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three-quarters
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of a
million
in 2010 and 2011 before reaching the peak of 1.5
million
in three consecutive years namely 2013, 2014 and 2015.
Afterwards
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Afterwards,
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it witnessed a decline to about 1.25
million
in 2016 before returning to the peak of 1.5
million
again in 2017. The
overall
number of
tourists
started the period from 1
million
and
then
faced five steady growth recording 2.75
million
in 2015 and 2016 before witnessing a significant jump to hit a summit of 3.5
million
in the
last
year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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