The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many
tourists
selected a specific caribbean
Change the capitalization
Caribbean
island
as their destination, whether stayed on island
or on cruise ships, over eight consecutive years from 2010 to 2017. Units are measured in millions.
Add an article
the island
an island
Overall
, it can be seen that the total number of tourists
witnessed a considerable upward trend during the period given. Furthermore
, the quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
travelers
Change the spelling
travellers
Correct pronoun usage
who stayed
stayed
on sea vessels reversed from being lower than those entering the Wrong verb form
staying
island
to becoming higher at the end
.
Firstly
, the figure for visitors staying on ships started at a quarter of a million
in the first year, then
hit half a million
in 2011 and a quarter of a million
again in 2012, before facing five consecutive climbs to reach the peak of 2 million
in 2017. Moreover
, the number of tourists
landing on island
began the period by registering Add an article
the island
three quarters
of a Add a hyphen
three-quarters
million
in 2010 and 2011 before reaching the peak of 1.5 million
in three consecutive years namely 2013, 2014 and 2015. Afterwards
it witnessed a decline to about 1.25 Add a comma
Afterwards,
million
in 2016 before returning to the peak of 1.5 million
again in 2017.
The overall
number of tourists
started the period from 1 million
and then
faced five steady growth recording 2.75 million
in 2015 and 2016 before witnessing a significant jump to hit a summit of 3.5 million
in the last
year.Submitted by sajjad.talebi2020 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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