The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.
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The table provides the ratio of temporary migrant
workfoce
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workforce
in New
Zealand
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, the United Kingdom, Australia, United States from 2003 to 2006 and the
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of
workers
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per 1000 people in these countries in 2006.
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, all countries had an increase in the number of temporary migrant
labours
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labourers
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, the United States remained the country with the highest figure.
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, New
Zealand
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composed the highest number per one thousand people in 2006. In 2003, the temporary migrant
workers
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in the US accounted for 577000 before increasing to 678000 in 2006. Australia saw a growth, with the former rising from 152000 to 219000 and the United Kingdom grew from 137000 to 266000. New
Zealand
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commenced at 65000
workers
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in 2003, going up to 87000 in 2006. In the trend of temporary migrant
workers
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per 1000 people in 2006, New
Zealand
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ranked
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at 21.1, followed by Australia at 10.7 and the United Kingdom at 4.4. The United States was the lowest, which stood at 2.3.
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