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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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, the
island
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´s coastal features show significant development in the tourist sector. It is evident that the
island
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 progressed from being a natural, undeveloped
area
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 to a recreational
area
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 equipped with the most important amenities for holidaymakers. In the past, the
island
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 remained untouched with no infrastructure and tourist facilities, featuring only natural elements
such
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 as palm trees and beaches. There were no buildings, paths, or man-made structures present. Today, the
island
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 demonstrates developed infrastructure primarily concentrated on the west side of the
island
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. The most striking alteration is the construction of multiple accommodation areas for tourists with reception, built in the centre of the
island
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. To the north of reception, the restaurant was constructed, providing convenient dining options for
visitors
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. Along the coast, footpaths and vehicle tracks were created, assisting
visitors
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 to commute between the recreational and commercial facilities easily. A
further
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 noticeable change is the construction of the pier in front of the reception. It allows ships to dock, making it easy to drop off and pick up
visitors
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.
This
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, in return, makes the
island
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 more attractive. The northern part of the
island
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 with the beach was
also
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 altered and now allows swimming after a small
area
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 was allocated for
this
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 purpose. To summarize, the
island
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 experienced dramatic improvements in its facilities and these developments have made the whole
area
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 a more interesting and convenient destination for
visitors
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.
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