The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart illustrates
percentage
of people who own their own house and who Add an article
the percentage
their
rented Correct pronoun usage
apply
house
in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Correct article usage
a house
Overall
, household
in owned Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
has
increased given period and Unnecessary verb
apply
household
in rented Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
has
decreased from 1918 to 2011 and slightly Unnecessary verb
apply
has
increased in Unnecessary verb
apply
final
year, 2011.
İnitially, Add an article
the final
Add an article
a household
the household
household
in owned Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
percent
was just over 20%, Replace the word
percentage
however
households in rented Add a comma
however,
occommodation
Correct your spelling
accommodation
percentage
was
approximately Change the verb form
were
forufold
, almost 80%. In 1971, Correct your spelling
fourfold
this
two subjects Correct determiner usage
these
was
equal to each other, 50% per cent. From 1939 to 1961 and from 1981 to 2001 Change the verb form
were
Add an article
the percentage
percentage
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
was
really similar to each other. But in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
these period
, Change the determiner
this period
these periods
percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
household
in owned Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
and household
in rented Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
was
opposite each other. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
For instance
, in 1953, household
in owned Correct article usage
the household
accommodation
percentage
was just over 30% and in 1991, household
in rented Correct article usage
the household
accommodation
percentage
was just over 30%. In addition
, in 1939 household
in rented Correct article usage
the household
accommodation
ratio approximately
70%, to opposite Add a missing verb
was approximately
this
, in 2001 household
in Correct article usage
the household
owned
ratio was just under 70%.
In Add an article
the owned
final
year, Add an article
the final
Correct article usage
the household
household
in owned Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
percentage
was twice as much Change preposition
as household
household
in rented Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
, about 63%.Submitted by bkardelenyilmazz on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, household, accommodation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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