The table shows the tourist numbers and tourist spending in five countries in 2012 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table shows the tourist numbers and tourist spending in five countries in 2012 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
of
tourists
(measured in millions) and tourist spending (measured in billions of dollars) in five countries (
France
,
USA
,
Spain
, China, and Italy) in two different years (2012 and 2013).
Overall
, the
number
of
tourists
in
France
, the
USA
,
Spain
, and Italy increased,
while
the
number
of Chinese
tourists
went down.
Moreover
, tourist spending climbed in the same two years. In terms of the
number
of
tourists
in
France
, it rose from 83
million
in 2012 to 84.7
million
in 2013.
Similarly
, in the
USA
, the
number
grew from 66.7
million
to 69.8
million
.
Likewise
, in
Spain
and Italy, the figures showed an upward trend of 3
million
and 1
million
, respectively.
On the other hand
, in China, the rate dropped from 57.7
million
in the first year to 55.7
million
in the second year. With regards to
tourists
in
France
, it went up from 53.6
billion
in 2012 to 56.1
billion
in 2013.
Similarly
, in
Spain
, China, and Italy, it grew by 4
billion
, 1.7
billion
, and 2.7
billion
, respectively. The
USA
demonstrated a notable improvement from 126.
billion
to 139.6
billion
.
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