People from cities go to university more often than those who live in the country. Some people think that the government should make it easier to enter universities for people who live outside the cities and towns by setting lower entry requirements and tuition fees. to what extent do you agreee or disagree with this statement.

The majority of

students

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that

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manage to attend a

university

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are mostly people from the urbanized

areas

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rather than people

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live in rural

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.

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issue has raised

concerned

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among

public

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and they

believed

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that the

government

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should enable the

students

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that

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who

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live in towns to enter a

university

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with

a

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apply

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lower entrance

requirements

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and

university

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fees. In my opinion, I agree

to lessen

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the tuition fees, but I disagree

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the

university

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entry

requirements

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as all

students

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should be given equal opportunity.

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,

students

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from rural

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have low family income. Most of their father either sell food in markets, farmers or fishermen

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their mother is a

housewife

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. The

government

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should provide more scholarships that support

family

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families

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with low income so smart

students

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will not have to worry about the fees as some organizations will provide full scholarships as long as they maintain a good result.

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,

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will motivate more

students

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from rural

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to take their studies more seriously as they have chances to enter the

university

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freely.

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, the admission

requirements

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should not be lowered to enter the

university

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.

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is because all

students

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should be given the same opportunity to continue their education. If the

government

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decides to reduce the required acceptance for

students

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in

remoted

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areas

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, they might not survive during their schooling in

university

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as it is an institution that

teach

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higher knowledge and learning in one’s major. So, all

students

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should enter the

university

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with the same

requirements

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. In conclusion, the

government

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should provide all

help

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the help

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they are able to give. All

students

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from any

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areas

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area

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should not take any benefits they

received

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receive

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for granted and continue to study diligently.