The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
The diagram illustrates several stages in the production of biofuel, which is ethanol.
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picture shows a carbon cycle.
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First,
trees and plants absorb carbon dioxide emitted by various factories and vehicles, Linking Words
subsequently
, the harvest is gathered and undergoes a preliminary processing phase, where it becomes cellulose.
Afterwards, it is transferred to the chemical laboratory, in which it is converted into sugar. After that, it will broken down by bacteria. And Linking Words
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finally
it turns into ethanol.
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transports
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emitting CO2, which will be absorbed by trees and plants. Linking Words
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is how the carbon cycle is established.Linking Words
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