In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, in business there is an emphasis when showcasing products by terming them, 'brand new'.
This
is because people
love new things. I think it is a positive strategy benefiting the company
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also
a negative development for customers.
On the one hand, it must be noted that many people
prefer purchasing new things than
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second hand
items. Because of Add a hyphen
second-hand
this
, business people
emphasise that their goods are new so as to attract many people
. For example
, a chocolate company bought chocolates in
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at
and
changed the package and claimed that the chocolates were brand new. Correct word choice
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Thus
, it is noted that companies emphasise their products are new yet they are not.
On the other hand
, giving false information is never good. Moreover
, companies are lying to people
by advertising that their goods are new when they are not. Further
, this
should be noted as a negative development for the consumers because these business people
are lying. For instance
, some people
have a habit of buying clothes at a cheap shop and selling them in their shop at a higher price. They remove
the old price tag and name of Wrong verb form
removed
previous
company and put their own. Add an article
the previous
Moreover
, they advertise and declare the clothes to be originally
and new from their shop. Change the word
original
Thus
, it should be noted that other companies are stealing other companies’ brands, changing them and making them their own and at the same time lying to the public and taking advantage of other people
.
In conclusion, nowadays, in most cases, adverts emphasise their products as being new. While
this
is good for the seller, because people
adore new things, conversely
, it should be noted that it is bad for the customer who is being lied upon
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