The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The process diagram illustrates the manufacturing of white sucrose from sugarcane.
Overall
, it can be seen that to get the juice out of the sugar cane plant, which is used as a raw material, is harvested and crushed after which the juice is heated till the water gets evaporated, and then
with the help of a centrifugal machine crystals are separated. This
is further
dried to obtain the end product.
On closer examination, it can be observed that, after the seeds are sown in the field, the sugar cane plant is allowed to grow for 12 to 18 months, after which it is either harvested manually or by a truck. Moreover
, the extraction of the juice from the plant takes place in a special machine called crusher
. The liquid is Add an article
a crusher
then
sent for purification to remove unwanted particles, and then
this
purified substance is put into a furnace to obtain syrup. The last
second step is to separate the crystals using the centrifuge, finally
, this
product is dried and cooled to obtain sugar.Submitted by yashaswikhot on
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