The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in sir cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given table provides information regarding the underground

railway

networks in different cities across the world. Among the given cities, London

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the oldest underground

railway

system. It was first opened

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1863 with a distance of 394 kilometres and 775

millions

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million

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passengers

annually. The second oldest underground

railway

system is

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Paris. Strecthed over 199

kilometeres

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kilometres

and

moving

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1191 million

passengers

annualy

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annually

, followed by Tokyo established in the

year

1927 with 155 Kilometres.

Eventhough

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Even though

Tokyo ranks third in terms of route length, with less than half of London's total distance, it transfers more travellers than any other

railway

systems

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system

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. Los Angeles is the most recently constructed underground

railway

system. The network was opened in 2001 with 28 km in length and moving 50

millions

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million

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passengers

every

year

. Kyoto

being

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the shortest

railway

network

extend

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extends

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to 11km and

transferring

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transfers

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45 million

passengers

every

year

. Washington DC started working in the

year

1976, moving 144 million

passengers

annaully

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annually

with a route length of 126 kilometres.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

164 words

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underground railway system
route length
annual passengers
opening date
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passenger numbers
comparison
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urban transit
infrastructure
length of the route
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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in sir cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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