The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts the manufacturing process of instant noodles in detail divided into various steps.
Overall
, it can be seen that the production process contains eight distinct levels from raw Linking Words
flour
and mixing to labelling and sealing. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it is evidently noticed that from the second step till the conclusion of the final product, all sections take place on an industrial roller to facilitate the whole noodle-making cycle.
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Furthermore
, the Linking Words
flour
truck discharges the Use synonyms
flour
in storage silos and Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
flour
is transferred to the edge of the roller to be mixed with water and oil. Afterwards, the Use synonyms
flour
goes through the third and fourth steps which are dough sheets and dough strips, resulting in noodles discs being manufactured in the fifth stage.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, cooking oil is added to these discs and Linking Words
then
they are dried in the sixth level. The seventh stage includes adding vegetables and spices into noodle cups before the whole process is concluded by labelling and sealing in the Linking Words
last
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Vocabulary: Replace the words flour with synonyms.
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