The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the fluctuation in the amount of
wheat
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exported over 3 different regions within 5 years of 1985. In general, the amount of
wheat
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in all areas exported decreasingly from 1985 to 1990. The figure for the European Community had the highest
wheat
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exports
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.
By contrast
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, it can be seen that Australia was the lowest. As regards Australia, the export output of
this
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product declined gradually through each year. Particularly, in 1985
this
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country had 15
millions
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of
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tonnes but in 1990 it was just over 10
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.
On the other hand
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,
wheat
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exports
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in the European Community soared,
although
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it was not stable. Example for,
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location had about 17
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tonnes but it dropped by around 4
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in 1968 and increased in the remaining years. Turning to Canada was the most erratic area, the amount of
wheat
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exports
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here hit a peak at 25
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tonnes in 1988 and there was a decrease in the country’s
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exports
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of 6
million
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from 1988 to 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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