The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 differentareas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the fluctuation in the amount of
wheat
exported over 3 different regions within 5 years of 1985.
In general, the amount of wheat
in all areas exported decreasingly from 1985 to 1990. The figure for the European Community had the highest wheat
exports
. By contrast
, it can be seen that Australia was the lowest.
As regards Australia, the export output of this
product declined gradually through each year. Particularly, in 1985 this
country had 15 millions
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million
of
tonnes but in 1990 it was just over 10 Change preposition
apply
millions
.
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million
On the other hand
, wheat
exports
in the European Community soared, although
it was not stable. Example for, this
location had about 17 million
tonnes but it dropped by around 4 million
in 1968 and increased in the remaining years.
Turning to Canada was the most erratic area, the amount of wheat
exports
here hit a peak at 25 million
tonnes in 1988 and there was a decrease in the country’s wheat
exports
of 6 million
from 1988 to 1990.Submitted by weezel on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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