The table below shows percentages of students with different attitudes for facilities in the university in the UK in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below shows percentages of students with different attitudes for facilities in the university in the UK in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The table compares the percentages of
students
with various levels of satisfaction
for
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the buildings in the university in the UK in 2008.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there was no significant difference in the attitudes towards the facilities between the two
group
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groups
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of
students
. Both
undergraduates
and
postgraduates
were most satisfied with the studies
facility
,
while
the cafeteria was liked by the lowest percentage of
students
. In 2008, for the study
facility
, the feedback of 90% of
postgraduates
and 85% of
undergraduates
were very satisfied. Less than 10%
students
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of students
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are quite satisfied and dissatisfied. The enjoyment of social
facility
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facilities
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was slightly lower, 75% of
undergraduates
and 65% of postgraduate
students
were very satisfied.
Additionally
,
although
the proportion of
postgraduates
not content with social
facility
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facilities
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was twice that of
undergraduates
, the figures were still insignificant. Regarding
cafeteria
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the cafeteria
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, only half of
undergraduates
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the undergraduates
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were very satisfied, followed by 35% for those quite satisfied and 15% for dissatisfied.
By contrast
, more
postgraduates
had negative feelings towards it (35%) and only 40% were very satisfied.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, undergraduates, postgraduates, facility with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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