You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: * describe what the accident was * explain when it happened * suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear friend, I’m writing

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letter to inform you that everything is going well,

hopping

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hoping

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you are doing the same. I

wish

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hope

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your trip

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Europe is really fun and you gained the experience you

needed

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. On the one hand, I want to inform you about the house you left me to look after. All the work is done and I

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took care

about

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cleaning inside and outside the house. I live in an extremely beautiful

detatched

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detached

house!

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I'm regretting

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that I wasn't

attentively

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enough and a little issue appeared. Your

garage's

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garage

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door was locked by a worker when he was trying to clean up meticulously the indoor space. I'm upset because I wasn't looking after him when he was doing

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stuff, but it's on me, I will get it fixed. Yesterday, all day long I was looking for a qualified person who could help me. Tomorrow morning he will be at your place and the door will be repaired.

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person is a very good friend of mine, we were together in high school and now he works as a technician. And because

you

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door is working on electricity, he will manage to get everything fixed. Sorry again and I'm waiting for your response. Best regards, your friend.

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task achievement

The letter overall addresses all parts of the task, but try to make your explanation a bit clearer about which part of the house was damaged initially. Also, ensure to describe the accident thoroughly.

coherence cohesion

While the letter follows a logical structure, improving the transitions between paragraphs would make the letter more coherent and easier to follow.

task achievement

Though the letter has a friendly tone, further refinement in the vocabulary would elevate the writing to sound more natural and suitable for a letter to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Avoid jumping between different topics in the same paragraph. Each main idea should ideally have its own paragraph to enhance clarity.

coherence cohesion

The letter adequately opens and closes with appropriate greetings and closing remarks which fits well with the intended tone.

task achievement

The letter covers all required details: the description of the accident, the timing, and a solution for fixing the damage.

task achievement

Commitment to resolving the problem and the proactive approach to fix the issue is well portrayed, demonstrating a responsible tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

215 words

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